Its all tranquil
Like the surface of water
And all the way down till your chin
Where as if perturbed by a pebble
Is a dimple
Cute,
And thoughtful.
(The poem appeared on Crack on the Spine Issue Eleven)
Like the surface of water
And all the way down till your chin
Where as if perturbed by a pebble
Is a dimple
Cute,
And thoughtful.
(The poem appeared on Crack on the Spine Issue Eleven)
Good poem. Assuming the lines...
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Is a dimple
Cute,
And thoughtful.
are referring to effect to infatuation ,they are beautiful. Even otherwise they are good. I have stopped analysing poetry too much now. Now reading poetry to get a feel of what a poem is,not rhyme and rhythm.
Thanks :) I will send you the cummings poem once I talked about. Wait.
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